Here is my revised video. Hope you like it. I want to have my students watch it for a review of blood types or to watch it if they were absent.
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Your voice was very clear, but it was very robotic. I would like to hear it with some life in it. I also agree that maybe it should have a chart to compare all the different blood types to each other. Overall nice work.
Nice topic! I think your voice is very clear but it sounds a little Robot like... like your reading it instead of naturally speaking. I love the examples of the blood types. I think this will help kids remember the types of blood and what types they can receive! Great job overall!
I agree with the other comments regarding your voice. Maybe some low background music can break up the silences and make the audio a little more interesting for the viewer.
The visuals are very good. I think it will definitely help the students remember the differences between blood types.
The credits did go by a little fast...maybe slow them down so the viewer can read them.
John--great job. I loved that vampire pic in the beginning-- that will definitely draw the students in. The three-d diagrams were great and colorcoded-- so that really helps to make it clear. The chart at the end was also a great review to sum it all up. Great job!
Hi Jon, I think that the objective of your video was clearly stated and achieved. I think that this video would be very useful for students to use as a review tool. I thought the use of the "Dracula" graphic and the blood bank sign at the end of your video were nice touches. I would suggest possibly adding the definitions of antigens and antibodies to your video for first time viewers. This way teachers might use the video as and introduction to blood types instead of using it simply as a tool for review. Nice work!
5 comments:
Your voice was very clear, but it was very robotic. I would like to hear it with some life in it. I also agree that maybe it should have a chart to compare all the different blood types to each other. Overall nice work.
Nice topic! I think your voice is very clear but it sounds a little Robot like... like your reading it instead of naturally speaking. I love the examples of the blood types. I think this will help kids remember the types of blood and what types they can receive! Great job overall!
Hi Jon,
I agree with the other comments regarding your voice. Maybe some low background music can break up the silences and make the audio a little more interesting for the viewer.
The visuals are very good. I think it will definitely help the students remember the differences between blood types.
The credits did go by a little fast...maybe slow them down so the viewer can read them.
Good job! :)
Wendy Binger (HHH Team)
John--great job. I loved that vampire pic in the beginning-- that will definitely draw the students in. The three-d diagrams were great and colorcoded-- so that really helps to make it clear. The chart at the end was also a great review to sum it all up. Great job!
Hi Jon,
I think that the objective of your video was clearly stated and achieved. I think that this video would be very useful for students to use as a review tool. I thought the use of the "Dracula" graphic and the blood bank sign at the end of your video were nice touches. I would suggest possibly adding the definitions of antigens and antibodies to your video for first time viewers. This way teachers might use the video as and introduction to blood types instead of using it simply as a tool for review. Nice work!
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