I have an excellent idea to really draw them in to the video-- I am sure you won't like it though. You could have the "Twilight" Vampires on the screen-- blood groups would be great with them as a backdrop. The middle school girls would love it! Haha... Anyway, I think you made it very clear with the diagrams and the clear way you spoke. I found myself getting a little confused and maybe would like to see an organized chart with all of them at the end (I know you had the visual of them all at the end but a chart might make it more clear and is a good closure/review). Also, maybe ask a few questions and let the viewer see if he/she got it or needs to go watch again. Just a thought...good job!!
Good job Jon. I liked the use of the little red things as blood, very creative. I also liked how you used the whiteboard. The one thing is it's hard to read the writing on the whiteboard. But that might also be because it's posted on your blog, and the video doesn't enlarge to view. Great job!
John, Nice job, I like how you used the props. I was always confused about the whole blood thing, now I have a better understanding. Your voice was clear and you got right to the point. No negative comments here.
Great video. Straight to the point. The students get the info. My only suggestions would be maybe some music. I would try a song about blood. Some special effect, like blood splatter? I enjoyed the video.
Nice job! I liked how you spoke slowly and clearly to explain each piece and you used visuals. I think this is a great way to explain blood types to students who have already learned what antigens and antibodies are. As a person who is not great in science, I need a bit of a refresher on that concept :) Maybe if you added some sort of music or graphic it would add to student interest. I really understand this much better now. Good Job!
Nicely done Jon! I love your blood type models & simple, but very effective white board charts. You have a nice, clear, strong voice for naration/voice-over:) How about a closing comment - like, 'What blod type do you have?' Don't forget to give blood! Julia
I totally learned something!! I am terrible with science and I found your diagrams great. What was that you used, playdough? In addition, I think it was good that you were straight forward and to the point because as we all know middle school children have a limited attention span.
The only suggestion that I have is to possible put a low volumed tune in the background so that you do not hear your papers ruffle or the extra noise at the end!
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Jon - I found your video to be very informative. Your voice is clear, and your diagrams are straightforward - making it easy for kids to understand.
Maybe as you revise your new draft, you should add music and special effects? Just a thought!
Great Job!!
I have an excellent idea to really draw them in to the video-- I am sure you won't like it though. You could have the "Twilight" Vampires on the screen-- blood groups would be great with them as a backdrop. The middle school girls would love it! Haha... Anyway, I think you made it very clear with the diagrams and the clear way you spoke. I found myself getting a little confused and maybe would like to see an organized chart with all of them at the end (I know you had the visual of them all at the end but a chart might make it more clear and is a good closure/review). Also, maybe ask a few questions and let the viewer see if he/she got it or needs to go watch again. Just a thought...good job!!
Good job Jon. I liked the use of the little red things as blood, very creative. I also liked how you used the whiteboard. The one thing is it's hard to read the writing on the whiteboard. But that might also be because it's posted on your blog, and the video doesn't enlarge to view. Great job!
John,
Nice job, I like how you used the props. I was always confused about the whole blood thing, now I have a better understanding. Your voice was clear and you got right to the point. No negative comments here.
Hey Mautschke,
Great video. Straight to the point. The students get the info. My only suggestions would be maybe some music. I would try a song about blood. Some special effect, like blood splatter? I enjoyed the video.
Nice job! I liked how you spoke slowly and clearly to explain each piece and you used visuals. I think this is a great way to explain blood types to students who have already learned what antigens and antibodies are. As a person who is not great in science, I need a bit of a refresher on that concept :) Maybe if you added some sort of music or graphic it would add to student interest. I really understand this much better now. Good Job!
Nicely done Jon! I love your blood type models & simple, but very effective white board charts. You have a nice, clear, strong voice for naration/voice-over:) How about a closing comment - like, 'What blod type do you have?'
Don't forget to give blood! Julia
I totally learned something!! I am terrible with science and I found your diagrams great. What was that you used, playdough? In addition, I think it was good that you were straight forward and to the point because as we all know middle school children have a limited attention span.
The only suggestion that I have is to possible put a low volumed tune in the background so that you do not hear your papers ruffle or the extra noise at the end!
Good draft!!
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